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THE WALKING DEAD!
Mister zombie doesn't have a name and his history is very vague.
Somethings we do know. He was a teacher in elementary school en had a wife and a baby.
The walkers attacked him while he was hiding in the bathroom and then he died in the tub. His right arm was being torn apart from his body and he has many raw wounds. His intestine are hanging out his body.
After he woke up, his body was sort of green. The people had tried a few times to shot him dead but he is still walking.
You can see his brains hanging out and he has a shot wound in his arm.
Wondering and starved searching after human flesh he ate a dog.
The beast has lost his paw and his intestine are hanging out.
Both are walking lonely around the earth.